Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本直接，但有明显的词汇和语法问题。“my physical ability is a related pool”表达不清，可能想说“我的身体协调能力较差”或“我身体比较虚弱”，可以改为“my physical coordination was quite poor”。“a child riding a bicycle is very scary thing”应改为“riding a bicycle was quite scary for me”或“it was quite scary for a child to ride a bicycle”。建议使用过去时，并补充一个具体原因或经历，使答案更自然、完整。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my physical coordination was quite poor. I found cycling quite scary, especially when I tried to balance on the bike. As a result, I usually played indoors instead.

제안: 答案没有完整表达观点，且句子结构不完整。“Actually no”应改为“Actually, not really”或“Not particularly”。“most people go out”信息不完整，需要说明人们通常如何出行，例如“most people use cars or public transport”。建议先直接回答问题，再给出原因或对比，并使用完整句子。

예시: Actually, bikes are not particularly popular in my country. Most people travel by car or public transport because the distances are quite long and the roads can be dangerous for cyclists. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people in large cities.

× When I was a child I didn't have a bicycle because my physical ability is a related pool.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle because my physical ability was poor.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，主句使用了过去时“was”，因此原因从句也应使用过去时。应将“is”改为“was”。另外，“related pool”不是正确的英语表达；这里可以用“poor”表示“较差”。

× As for me a child riding a bicycle is very scary thing.

✓ For me, riding a bicycle as a child was a very scary thing.

句子谈论的是童年时的感受，因此应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。此外，使用“riding a bicycle as a child”比“a child riding a bicycle”更自然。

× As for me a child riding a bicycle is very scary thing.

✓ For me, riding a bicycle as a child was a very scary thing.

可数名词短语“very scary thing”前面需要冠词。因为这里指的是一个很可怕的事情，所以应在“very scary thing”前加不定冠词“a”，构成“a very scary thing”。