Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question using the past tense because it refers to your childhood: say “Yes, I did.” Describe the bike accurately and naturally by using “two small training wheels at the back” instead of “another two at the back.” Avoid fillers such as “umm” and explain the purpose clearly with “so that I could learn to ride it.”

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my father bought me a small bike with two extra training wheels at the back. They helped me keep my balance while I was learning to ride it.

제안: Your answer has a clear opinion and a relevant detail, but the final sentence is incomplete and repeats the idea of riding a bike. Replace it with a specific example, such as commuting to school, going to local markets, or exercising. Use a linking phrase such as “For example” to connect the supporting detail naturally.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. People often use them to travel short distances because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many villagers ride bikes to nearby markets or to work.

× Yes I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike.

The question asks about a past situation, indicated by had and when you were a child. Therefore, use the past-tense auxiliary did instead of the present-tense form do. Remember to keep the answer tense consistent with the question.

× When I was a child my father bought me one with umm I think 2 wheels and another two at the back to support me to learn riding a bike.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought me one with, um, I think, two wheels and another two at the back to help me learn to ride a bike.

After learn, use the infinitive form to ride, not the -ing form riding. The natural pattern is learn to + base verb. Also, help me learn to ride is more natural than support me to learn riding. Use learn to ride when describing the process of acquiring this skill.

× Uh, for example when you ride a bike.

✓ For example, people use bikes when they need to travel short distances.

The original wording is an incomplete and unclear example because it does not clearly connect to the previous idea. A complete sentence should express a clear subject, verb, and meaning. Use people use bikes when they need to travel short distances to provide a complete example that supports the previous sentence.