Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且包含了具体细节，但有几处语法和搭配错误：应将“buy”改为过去式“bought”；“my 10 years old birthday gift”应改为“my tenth birthday”或“a gift for my tenth birthday”；“I love it”应使用过去时“I loved it”，因为你谈论的是童年经历。建议使用“because”或“so”连接原因和结果，并补充自行车的颜色、用途或你骑车时的感受，使答案更自然、更丰富。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike for my tenth birthday, and I loved it. It was blue, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: 回答了问题，但“it's popular”中的主语不明确，应改为“bikes are popular”；“persons ride a bike”不自然，建议使用“people ride bikes”；“everywhere in the road or in the street”表达重复且搭配不当，可改为“on roads and streets”。避免使用没有实际作用的“you know”，并加入具体原因，例如自行车环保、方便或适合短途出行。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see people riding them on roads and streets, especially in large cities. Many people choose bikes because they are convenient, environmentally friendly, and affordable.

× Yes, when I was a child my parents buy a bike for my 10 years old birthday gift and I love it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike as a gift for my 10th birthday, and I loved it.

句子描述的是童年时期发生的事情，因此要使用一般过去时。buy 的过去式是 bought，love 的过去式是 loved。建议先判断事件发生的时间，再统一使用相应的时态。

× Yes, when I was a child my parents buy a bike for my 10 years old birthday gift and I love it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike as a gift for my 10th birthday, and I loved it.

“10 years old birthday”不能正确修饰“birthday”。表示“十岁生日”应使用序数词“10th”，说成“my 10th birthday”。建议区分“10 years old”（表示某人或某物十岁）和“10th birthday”（表示第十个生日）。

× Yes, it's popular and you can see persons ride a bike everywhere in the road or in the street, you know.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular, and you can see people riding them everywhere on the road or in the street, you know.

前文的主语是复数名词“bikes”，所以不能用单数代词“it”指代，应直接说“bikes”或使用复数代词“they”。后面“a bike”被替换为复数代词“them”，与“people”看到的多辆自行车相对应。建议注意代词的单复数必须和它所指代的名词保持一致。

× Yes, it's popular and you can see persons ride a bike everywhere in the road or in the street, you know.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular, and you can see people riding them everywhere on the road or in the street, you know.

表示“在道路上”通常使用介词“on”，所以应说“on the road”，而不是“in the road”。“in the street”可以表示“在街道上”。建议记住常见搭配：“on the road”和“in the street”。