Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, but add specific details to make your response more developed. Mention what the bike was like, when you used it, or what you used it for. Use a linking word such as “and” or “because” to connect your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike that my parents gave me when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: State your opinion more confidently and support it with specific reasons or examples. You could mention who uses bikes, where people ride them, or why cycling is popular. Avoid vague expressions such as “I think so” when you can give a clear explanation.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. Many people ride them in parks or use them for short journeys because they are cheap and environmentally friendly.