Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid repeating “I usually” and correct the expressions “have a bite” and “go a bike.” Use “had a bike” and “rode my bike.” Add one specific detail about where or why you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to school because it was faster than walking. I also enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: State your opinion clearly and avoid repeating words such as “I” and “because.” Correct “by” to “bikes,” “my countries” to “my country,” and “my own” to “many of them” or “many bikes.” Explain why bikes are popular and support your answer with a specific observation or example.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are inexpensive and convenient. I often see cyclists using the roads and designated bike lanes during rush hour.

× Yes, exactly. I usually I have a bite and I usually go a bike to school.

✓ Yes, exactly. I usually had a bike, and I usually rode my bike to school.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use had instead of have and rode instead of go. Also, the correct expression is rode my bike, not go a bike.

× Yes, exactly. I usually I have a bite and I usually go a bike to school.

✓ Yes, exactly. I usually had a bike, and I usually rode my bike to school.

The sentence contains a repeated subject and an incorrectly structured verb phrase. Say I usually had, not I usually I have, and use the complete phrase rode my bike to school.

× Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are popular transportation in my country because I often see bikes on the road.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Use the singular form country because you are referring to one country. Avoid the unnecessary repeated words I and because.

× Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are popular transportation in my country because I often see bikes on the road.

My own cannot be used by itself in this sentence because it does not clearly identify what you see. Repeat the noun bikes or use them if the noun has already been clearly mentioned.

× Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are popular transportation in my country because I often see bikes on the road.

The sentence has repeated words and an incomplete or unclear clause. A clear structure is I think ..., because I often see .... Place the adjective before the noun in popular transportation and remove the unnecessary words I am.