Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Give a direct answer first, then add one or two specific details, such as when you got the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it. Keep your response to no more than five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

제안: Your answer is relevant, but the phrase “in our in my country” contains a self-correction and sounds unnatural. Use a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country,” and support it with a specific reason or example. You could mention commuting, exercise, or environmental benefits.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and office workers. Many people ride them for exercise or to avoid traffic during rush hour. In addition, cycling is becoming more common because it is affordable and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, actually bikes are popular in our in my country.

✓ Yes, actually, bikes are popular in my country.

The phrase 'our in my country' is incorrectly structured because 'our' is unnecessary and creates a repetition before the prepositional phrase 'in my country.' Use only 'in my country.' The grammar problem type ID is 26.