Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Use “had” instead of “have,” and “was” instead of “were.” The phrase “when I were a cherry” is unclear; the correct phrase is “when I was a child.” Avoid repeating the same idea and add one specific detail about the bicycle or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Your main idea and reason are clear, but the answer contains grammatical errors and an unclear phrase. Use “most people” rather than “most of the people,” and keep the subject consistent by saying “when they go out” instead of “when you go out.” Replace “from Dav andanja” with a clear place or purpose, and add a specific example, such as commuting, exercising, or avoiding traffic.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and short trips. They are especially common in cities, where cycling is a convenient way to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a cherry.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience in childhood, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have. The word child is also required to express the intended meaning; cherry is not grammatically appropriate in this context.

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a cherry.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. Use I was, he was, and she was, but use you were, we were, and they were.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because most of the people use bikes when you go out from Dav andanja.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because most people use bikes when they go out.

The pronoun you does not agree with the subject most people. Use they because most people is plural. Also, most people is the more natural expression when speaking generally.