Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and add a specific detail, such as how you used the bicycle. However, correct the word order and avoid unnecessary fillers. Say “my mother bought it for me for my birthday” rather than “my mother both bought me for my birthday.” You could also use “when I was younger” instead of repeating “when I was young.”

예시: Yes, I did. When I was younger, I had a small red bicycle that my mother bought for me for my birthday. I used to ride it every day, especially around my neighborhood.

제안: The answer has a clear opinion and a reason, but several phrases need correction. Use “people of all ages,” “on the streets and in markets,” and “commute short distances.” Add a specific result or example to make the answer more developed and coherent. Avoid saying “of or age” and “in a strict.”

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. I often see people of all ages riding them on the streets and in local markets because bikes are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. They are especially common in crowded cities, where they can help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. I often see people of or age riding them in a strict and markets because they are an affordable and convenient way to commute short distance.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. I often see people of our age riding them in a strict and markets because they are an affordable and convenient way to commute short distance.

The pronoun or is incorrect in this context. It should be our to show that the people are in the same age group as the speaker. However, the expression strict and markets appears to contain a vocabulary or transcription error, which is outside the specified grammar categories.

× Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. I often see people of or age riding them in a strict and markets because they are an affordable and convenient way to commute short distance.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. I often see people of or age riding them in a strict and markets because they are an affordable and convenient way to commute a short distance.

The singular countable noun distance requires an article when it is used with the adjective short. Therefore, a short distance is correct. Alternatively, you could use the plural form short distances without an article.