Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “Yes, I had a bike.” Avoid hesitations, repeated words, and unfinished phrases such as “my, my,” “MMM,” and “because bike can.” Organize your response with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details, such as who taught you, where you rode, or why you enjoyed cycling. Use accurate grammar, especially “I had,” “my family had,” and “bikes can take us to many places.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My older brother taught me how to ride it, and I often cycled around my neighborhood after school. It was convenient because I could travel farther than I could on foot, and it was also a lot of fun.

제안: Your answer is relevant and well developed, with a clear opinion and a logical reason. Improve grammatical accuracy by saying “instead of bikes” or “instead of riding bikes,” and avoid using two linking expressions together in “As a result, so.” You could also make the answer more natural by replacing “I'm Malaysian” with “In Malaysia” and adding a specific comparison or example to support your point.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Malaysia, especially for commuting. One reason is that many roads do not have dedicated bike lanes, so cycling can feel unsafe. Consequently, most people prefer to drive or ride motorcycles, although bicycles are still popular for exercise and leisure.

× Yes, I do have a bike one while I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

Because the question asks about a past period, the answer should use the past tense. Use did have instead of do have. When is also the correct word for referring to the time of your childhood.

× My family used to have bike.

✓ My family used to have a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike when mentioning one nonspecific bike.

× My brother said that and you're when you're outside or you were studying outside, you should learn how to ride a bike.

✓ My brother said that when I was outside or studying outside, I should learn how to ride a bike.

After said that, use indirect speech consistently. Since the story is about the past, change you are to I was and you should to I should. Do not mix direct-speech forms with an indirect-speech structure.

× Instead of walking cause bike can, because when we ride a bike, we can like go to, uh, any places.

✓ I should ride a bike instead of walking because a bike can take me anywhere.

The original wording contains an incomplete and disorganized clause, as well as repeated conjunctions. Use one complete sentence with a clear subject and verb: a bike can take me anywhere. Because is sufficient to connect the two ideas.

× As a result, so most people prefer driving cars or using a motorcycle for their daily commute.

✓ As a result, most people prefer driving cars or using a motorcycle for their daily commute.

As a result and so both express a result, so using them together is redundant. Use either one, but not both in the same clause.

× Most people prefer driving cars or using a motorcycle for their daily commute instead of bike.

✓ Most people prefer driving cars or using a motorcycle for their daily commute instead of a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it requires an article. Use a bike when referring to one bike in a general comparison.