Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Also, “bike” and “bicycle” usually have the same meaning, so saying “No” and then mentioning a bicycle is contradictory. Use “ride a bicycle,” not “run it,” and add one specific detail about where or how often you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed using it to visit my friends.

제안: Your answer is relevant, but it repeats “popular” and “bikes” several times and does not clearly explain why they are popular. State your main idea, then support it with specific examples, such as motorcycles, electric bicycles, convenience, or low cost. Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example,” and distinguish between bicycles and motorcycles if that is what you mean.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially motorcycles and electric bicycles. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient in heavy traffic. For example, brands such as Honda and Suzuki are commonly seen on city streets.

× No, I don't have a bike, but I have a bicycle of two wheels and I run it on the streets in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I had a bicycle with two wheels, and I rode it on the streets during my childhood.

The question asks about the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use didn't have instead of don't have, had instead of have, and rode instead of run.

× No, I don't have a bike, but I have a bicycle of two wheels and I run it on the streets in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I had a bicycle with two wheels, and I rode it on the streets during my childhood.

With two wheels, use the preposition with rather than of. Also, use during my childhood to describe the period when the action happened.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are bikes, different bikes, Honda, Suzuki and some electric bikes and they are very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are different kinds of bikes, such as Honda and Suzuki bikes and some electric bikes, and they are very popular.

The second sentence has an unclear list and weak sentence structure. Use different kinds of bikes and such as to introduce examples clearly. Keep the items in the list grammatically parallel.