Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t have a bike.” Use “in my childhood” or “when I was a child,” but not both repeatedly. Correct the verb forms: “my father didn’t support me in buying a bike” and “there were a lot of accidents in our area.” Complete your final idea instead of ending with “That’s why my.” You could also add one specific result, such as what you did instead of cycling.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My father didn’t support me in buying one because there were many accidents in our area. As a result, I usually walked to school or played indoors with my friends.

제안: Begin with a clear answer: “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Use natural expressions such as “the number of people using bikes is increasing” instead of “the number of buying bikes.” Correct the grammar in “people prefer to buy bikes rather than other vehicles.” Explain the reason clearly; “dreamy” does not fit this context, so use “affordable,” “convenient,” or “environmentally friendly.” Include a specific supporting detail about commuting, traffic, or cost.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and their popularity is increasing every year. Many people prefer them to cars because they are affordable and convenient, especially in crowded cities. In addition, bikes help people avoid traffic and reduce pollution.

× No, I don't had any bike in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Because the question asks about the past, use the past auxiliary did. After did not, use the base form have, not the past form had.

× No, I don't had any bike in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bike. Alternatively, you could say I didn't have any bikes.

× When I was, uh, child, my father was not support me to, uh, bought a bike.

✓ When I was a child, my father did not support me in buying a bike.

The singular countable noun child needs the article a. The natural phrase is a child.

× My father was not support me to, uh, bought a bike.

✓ My father did not support me in buying a bike.

Use did not support to express a negative action in the past. After did not, use the base form support, not was support.

× My father was not support me to, uh, bought a bike.

✓ My father did not support me in buying a bike.

The verb support is naturally followed by someone in doing something or someone with something. Therefore, use in buying after support me.

× There are a lot of accidents was happen in our areas.

✓ There were a lot of accidents in our area.

The noun accidents is plural and the event is in the past, so use there were. Do not add was happen after there were.

× There are a lot of accidents was happen in our areas.

✓ There were a lot of accidents in our area.

The story describes the speaker's childhood, so use the past form were rather than the present form are.

× There are a lot of accidents was happen in our areas.

✓ There were a lot of accidents in our area.

Area should be singular here because the speaker is referring to the general area where they lived. If several locations are meant, you can say in our areas.

× That's why my.

✓ That's why my father did not buy me a bike.

The original sentence is incomplete because my is followed by no noun or verb. Add a complete subject and verb to express the intended meaning.

× Yeah, I think bikes are so much popular in our country.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in our country.

Popular is an adjective, so use the intensifier very before it. So much is not normally used to modify this adjective.

× Day by day the number of buying bikes or people using bikes are increasing.

✓ Day by day, the number of people buying and using bikes is increasing.

The original sentence incorrectly combines the number of buying bikes with people using bikes. Use the clear structure the number of people buying and using bikes.

× Day by day the number of buying bikes or people using bikes are increasing.

✓ Day by day, the number of people buying and using bikes is increasing.

The subject is the number, which is singular, so the verb must be is, not are. The plural noun people does not determine the verb because it is part of an of-phrase.

× Well people are preferred to buy bike rather than buy another vehicles because it was so dreamy.

✓ Well, people prefer to buy bikes rather than other vehicles because owning a bike is their dream.

People are doing the action, so use the active verb prefer, not the passive form are preferred. Also, prefer can be followed by to buy.

× Well people are preferred to buy bike rather than buy another vehicles because it was so dreamy.

✓ Well, people prefer to buy bikes rather than other vehicles because owning a bike is their dream.

Use the plural form bikes when speaking about bikes in general. Vehicles is already plural, so other vehicles is correct.

× Well people are preferred to buy bike rather than buy another vehicles because it was so dreamy.

✓ Well, people prefer to buy bikes rather than other vehicles because owning a bike is their dream.

When referring to bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes without an article. In the expression owning a bike, use a before the singular countable noun bike.

× Well people are preferred to buy bike rather than buy another vehicles because it was so dreamy.

✓ Well, people prefer to buy bikes rather than other vehicles because owning a bike is their dream.

The answer describes a general preference in the present, so use the present tense prefer. The past form was is not appropriate for this general statement.