Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ в целом соответствует вопросу и содержит личные детали, но есть несколько грамматических и логических проблем. Используйте прошедшее время правильно: “when I was a child”, а не “when I were a child”. Избегайте лишних связок и повторов, например “and because”, “and but”, “so like”. Также объясните, почему вы почти не пользовались велосипедом, чтобы ответ был более завершённым и естественным. Лучше построить ответ так: прямой ответ → причина/деталь → результат или уточнение.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me along with a scooter, and I was really excited because it felt like a big present. However, I hardly used the bike because I found it difficult to ride.

제안: Вы выразили мнение, но ответ недостаточно чёткий и содержит много повторов и грамматических ошибок. Начните с ясного утверждения: “Yes, bikes are quite popular…” или “Not really…”. Используйте правильную конструкцию “love riding bikes”, а не “love drive bikes”, и избегайте повторения “because”. Важно отделить общую популярность велосипедов в стране от вашего личного отношения. Добавьте конкретную причину или пример, например использование велосипедов для поездок, спорта или отдыха.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among young people and those who enjoy outdoor activities. However, I personally do not ride very often because I find cycling uncomfortable and tiring. I usually prefer walking or using public transport.

× Yeah, I had a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past situation. The verb be must be in the past tense, and was is used with the subject I. Practice the past forms of be: I was, you were, he was, and they were.

× My mom and dad bought me a bike and scooter.

✓ My mom and dad bought me a bike and a scooter.

The singular countable noun scooter needs an article. Use a before each singular countable noun when it is mentioned generally or for the first time.

× It was so like big present for me.

✓ It was such a big present for me.

The singular countable noun present needs the article a. Also, use such a big present, not so like big present. Use such before a noun phrase and so before an adjective or adverb.

× I don't use the bike.

✓ I didn't use the bike.

The student is describing childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use did not or didn't plus the base form of the verb: didn't use.

× Some people love drive bikes.

✓ Some people love riding bikes.

After love, a gerund with the -ing form is natural when describing an activity. Use riding, not drive. The phrase ride bikes is also more natural than drive bikes.

× When I grew up, I dislike it bikes.

✓ When I grew up, I disliked bikes.

The sentence refers to a past period, so dislike should be changed to the past form disliked. The object should be bikes, not it bikes. Use a pronoun only when it clearly replaces a noun.

× Bikes seems so uncomfortable for me right now.

✓ Bikes seem so uncomfortable to me right now.

Bikes is plural, so the plural pronoun they can be used instead of repeating the noun: They seem so uncomfortable to me right now. Do not use singular it to refer to plural bikes.

× Bikes seems so uncomfortable for me right now.

✓ Bikes seem so uncomfortable to me right now.

The subject bikes is plural, so it must take the plural verb seem, not the singular verb seems. Remember: a bike seems, but bikes seem.