Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有直接说明是否拥有自行车，而且把“bike”误说成了“bag”。应先用清晰的“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”直接回答，然后补充一到两个具体细节，例如学习骑车的年龄、骑车地点或使用频率。避免重复、犹豫和未完成的句子；本题用过去时，因为问题问的是童年经历。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near my home. I used to cycle there with my friends at weekends.

제안: 回答基本表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，并给出了环保和健康两个理由，这是较好的结构。不过，“back”应改为“bikes”，“green travelling”更自然的说法是“eco-friendly transportation”或“cycling”，最后一句没有完成。建议使用“because”或“also”连接理由，并补充具体结果或例子，例如城市里自行车道增多、通勤者骑车上班。

예시: Yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country. This is mainly because more people are choosing eco-friendly forms of transportation and are becoming more health-conscious. In many cities, people cycle to work, and new bike lanes are being built.

× Yes, I have a bag.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题发生在过去的童年时期，所以应该使用一般过去时“had”，而不是现在时“have”。同时，回答应与问题中的“bike”保持一致。建议：谈论过去的经历时，注意使用动词的过去式，例如“had”“was”和“liked”。

× Well, I am. I was a child as the kids, uh, as a kid before, uh, if my memory serves me right, uh, I was trying to learn, uh.

✓ Well, if my memory serves me right, when I was a kid, I was trying to learn to ride a bike.

原句中“I am”是与上下文无关的残缺表达；“as the kids”结构错误；“I was trying to learn”后面缺少具体学习内容。可以使用“when I was a kid”引导时间状语，并说“learn to ride a bike”来使句子结构完整、意思清楚。

× MMM yes I think back is definitely popular.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are definitely popular.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，因此应该使用复数名词“bikes”。复数主语“bikes”也要搭配复数动词“are”。另外，“back”应为“bike”，但这是单词选择或发音问题，不属于所列语法类型。

× People are more concerned about their health and the traveling by.

✓ People are more concerned about their health, so they travel by bike more often.

原句后半部分“the traveling by”没有完整表达，介词“by”后面缺少交通工具，导致句子结构不完整。可以使用“so”连接原因和结果，并使用完整句子“they travel by bike more often”。