Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and separate your ideas into two sentences. Use the correct verb “ride,” not “write,” and say “my grandmother took me to school” instead of “I usually take my grandma take me.” Add a clear reason to explain why you did not have a bike.

예시: No, I didn’t. My family thought it was too dangerous for me to ride a bike, so my grandmother usually took me to school by motorbike.

제안: Use correct subject–verb agreement: “everybody rides.” Clarify the comparison because “ride a car” is incorrect and the final idea is confusing. You could say that many people ride bicycles, while others use cars, and support your answer with a specific example or reason.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to travel short distances, while others prefer to drive cars for longer journeys. In my city, it is common to see people cycling in parks and along bike lanes.

× No, I didn't my family said it's too dangerous for me to write so I usually take my grandma take me to school by motorbike.

✓ No, I didn't. My family said it was too dangerous for me to ride, so my grandma usually took me to school by motorbike.

The question asks about the past, so the past-tense forms was and took are needed. Was is the backshifted form of is in reported speech, and took describes a repeated action during the student's childhood. Also, ride is the appropriate verb for using a bike; write means to produce words.

× No, I didn't my family said it's too dangerous for me to write so I usually take my grandma take me to school by motorbike.

✓ No, I didn't. My family said it was too dangerous for me to ride, so my grandma usually took me to school by motorbike.

The original answer contains several clauses joined without proper punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Use a full stop after I didn't and a comma before so. The phrase I usually take my grandma take me is also incorrectly structured; use my grandma usually took me instead.

× Yes, of course everybody ride a bike just some people ride car and bicycle

✓ Yes, of course. Everybody rides a bike, but some people ride cars and bicycles.

Everybody is grammatically singular, so the verb in the present tense must be rides, not ride. The verb ride describes a general fact, so the present tense is appropriate.

× Yes, of course everybody ride a bike just some people ride car and bicycle

✓ Yes, of course. Everybody rides a bike, but some people ride cars and bicycles.

The nouns cars and bicycles should be plural because some people refers to more than one person and the statement describes vehicles in general. Use a bike in the phrase everybody rides a bike because each person rides one bike at a time.

× Yes, of course everybody ride a bike just some people ride car and bicycle

✓ Yes, of course. Everybody rides a bike, but some people ride cars and bicycles.

The word just does not correctly connect the two contrasting ideas. Use but to show the contrast between everybody riding bikes and some people also using cars and bicycles.

× Yes, of course everybody ride a bike just some people ride car and bicycle

✓ Yes, of course. Everybody rides a bike, but some people ride cars and bicycles.

The original sentence joins two independent ideas without appropriate punctuation or a suitable conjunction. Add a full stop after of course and use but to connect the contrasting clauses.