Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本偏离了问题，且多次把“bike”说成“bag”。应先直接回答“有/没有”，然后按时间顺序补充细节。语法方面应使用过去时，例如“when I was twelve”和“I got”；“resistant ride”表达不清，可以改为“a reliable bike”或“a more expensive bike”。注意使用完整句子和合适的连接词，如“Later”和“because”。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got my first one from my father as a birthday present when I was twelve. It was quite simple, but I enjoyed riding it around my neighbourhood. Later, when I went to university, I bought a more reliable and expensive bike.

제안: 观点明确，也提到了共享单车这一具体例子，但应统一使用“bikes”，不要说“bags”。“covenant”应改为“convenient”，“low cost way”可改为“an inexpensive form of transport”，“bike sharing services”应使用复数。建议先给出结论，再说明原因，最后补充共享单车的例子；避免重复使用“I think”，并使用“Moreover”或“As a result”增强逻辑。

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. They are a convenient and inexpensive form of transport, especially for short journeys. Moreover, bike-sharing services have become common in many cities, so people can easily rent a bike through a mobile app. As a result, many commuters use bikes to avoid traffic jams.

× Yes, when I was child, I'm twelve years old, I got my first bag from my father on my birthday.

✓ Yes, when I was a child and twelve years old, I got my first bag from my father on my birthday.

可数名词child前面需要冠词。这里表示“我是一个孩子”，所以要用不定冠词a。

× Yes, when I was child, I'm twelve years old, I got my first bag from my father on my birthday.

✓ Yes, when I was a child and twelve years old, I got my first bag from my father on my birthday.

问题发生在过去，且主句使用了过去时got，因此“我十二岁”也应该使用过去时was，而不能使用现在时am。

× This is the first bag for me and when I go to university and get resistant ride, which is much expensive.

✓ This was the first bag for me, and when I went to university and got a resistant ride, it was much more expensive.

你是在描述童年或过去的经历，所以is、go和get都应改为过去式was、went和got。

× This is the first bag for me and when I go to university and get resistant ride, which is much expensive.

✓ This was the first bag for me, and when I went to university and got a resistant ride, it was much more expensive.

可数名词ride是单数，前面需要冠词。这里使用不定冠词a，构成a resistant ride。

× This is the first bag for me and when I go to university and get resistant ride, which is much expensive.

✓ This was the first bag for me, and when I went to university and got a resistant ride, it was much more expensive.

much通常修饰比较级，不能直接修饰expensive。表示“贵得多”时，应使用much more expensive。

× This is the first bag for me and when I go to university and get resistant ride, which is much expensive.

✓ This was the first bag for me, and when I went to university and got a resistant ride, it was much more expensive.

原句把多个动作和从句直接连接在一起，结构不清楚。使用and连接前后内容，并用it作主语，使句子结构完整、清晰。

× Yes, I think bags are popular in China because I think it is a covenant way and low cost away for Chinese and in recent years.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in China because I think they are a convenient, low-cost way for Chinese people, especially in recent years.

先行词bags是复数，因此代词应使用复数they，而不能使用单数it。代词的数必须与先行词保持一致。

× Yes, I think bags are popular in China because I think it is a covenant way and low cost away for Chinese and in recent years.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in China because I think they are a convenient, low-cost way for Chinese people, especially in recent years.

主语bags是复数，所以对应的be动词应使用are。原句中的it is与复数主语不一致。

× So many people use bike as a traffic method.

✓ So many people use bikes as a means of transportation.

many people表示很多人，通常谈论他们使用的交通工具时，应使用复数bikes。单数bike在这里不合适。

× So many people use bike as a traffic method.

✓ So many people use bikes as a means of transportation.

如果使用单数可数名词bike，前面需要冠词；这里改为复数bikes后不需要冠词。同时，means of transportation是更符合语法和习惯的表达。