Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly addresses the question. However, it is too short and repeats the basic idea without providing supporting details. Add a reason, a specific memory, or information about how often you rode your bike. For example, explain where you usually rode it or who you rode with.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. It was a fun way to exercise and spend time outdoors.

제안: Your answer is relevant, but the first two sentences are repetitive. Also, “Everyone tends to go to work by their bike” is unnatural and too general. Say “Many people commute by bike” or “People often ride their bikes to work.” Develop your answer with specific reasons, such as lower costs, environmental benefits, or avoiding traffic, and use a linking word such as “because” or “especially.”

예시: Yes, absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities, because they are inexpensive and help people avoid traffic. Many people ride their bikes to work, while others use them for exercise or short trips.

× Everyone tends to go to work by their bike.

✓ Everyone tends to go to work by bike.

The expression 'by bike' is the standard way to describe the method of transportation. We normally do not use a possessive determiner such as 'their' after 'by' when referring to transportation in general. If you want to emphasize individual bicycles, you can say, 'Everyone tends to go to work on their bikes.'