Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ дан прямо и дополнен причиной, что соответствует базовой структуре. Однако есть несколько ошибок: нужно сказать “it was a gift”, “I didn’t ride it much” вместо “write”, а также “I couldn’t keep my balance”. Избегайте повторения “when I was a child” после “I was five years old”; ответ можно сделать более естественным и связным с помощью “However” или “because”.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me when I was five, but I didn’t ride it very often because I couldn’t keep my balance. I often fell off, so I gradually lost interest in cycling.

제안: Идея понятна, но ответ содержит неестественные формулировки и грамматические ошибки. Используйте “a convenient means of transport” или “a convenient way to travel”, “for office workers” лучше заменить на “for commuters”, а “traffic” является неисчисляемым словом. Уберите повтор “for for” и замените “So also” на связку “Moreover” или “In addition”; также нужен артикль в “an eco-friendly vehicle”. Добавьте конкретный результат или пример, чтобы ответ был более содержательным.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among commuters. They are a convenient way to get around during rush hour because cyclists can avoid traffic jams. In addition, bikes are eco-friendly and help reduce air pollution.

× it was gift from my parents

✓ it was a gift from my parents

The singular countable noun gift requires the indefinite article a because it is mentioned for the first time.

× I didn't write it much because I couldn't keep my balance, so I fell off.

✓ I didn't ride it much because I couldn't keep my balance, so I fell off.

The correct verb for using a bike is ride, not write. This is primarily a word-choice error rather than a grammar error, but ride is needed for the sentence to express the intended meaning.

× especially for for office workers

✓ especially for office workers

The preposition for is unnecessarily repeated. Use for only once before office workers.

× during rush hours and traffics

✓ during rush hours and traffic

Traffic is generally an uncountable noun when referring to the movement of vehicles, so it does not usually take the plural form traffics.

× it's eco friendly vehicle

✓ it's an eco-friendly vehicle

The singular countable noun vehicle requires the indefinite article an. An is used because eco-friendly begins with a vowel sound. The compound adjective should also be written as eco-friendly.

× So also it's eco friendly vehicle.

✓ They are also eco-friendly vehicles.

The original sentence has an unnatural word order and an unclear pronoun. Because bikes is plural, use they are rather than it's. Also is placed before the main adjective phrase, and the plural noun vehicles agrees with the plural subject.