Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense: say “Yes, I had a bike.” Avoid repeating “when I was a child” and correct the grammar: “that bike was,” “it was decorated with flowers,” and “its color was pink.” Organize the answer into a clear topic sentence followed by specific details about who chose it and why it was meaningful. Complete your final sentence instead of stopping at “when we.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was pink and decorated with colorful flowers, so it looked very special. My parents chose it for me, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood because it made me feel independent.

제안: Begin with a clear answer such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Use correct plural forms: “bikes are,” “many kinds of bikes,” and “their bikes are.” Replace unclear and repetitive phrases such as “Here’s a course,” “really really,” and “the price is up.” Add one complete, specific reason—for example, bikes are affordable, convenient, or useful for commuting—and finish the response with a complete sentence.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride them to school because they are convenient and relatively affordable. In addition, cycling is a good way to avoid traffic and stay healthy, so I often see people using bikes in my neighborhood.

× Yes, of course I have a bike when I used to be a child or when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past tense had instead of the present tense have. The phrase used to be a child is unnecessary because was a child is the natural expression.

× That bikes was really amazing and really meaningful to me.

✓ That bike was really amazing and meaningful to me.

Bike refers to one item, so it must be singular. Also, meaningful does not need to be repeated with really in this sentence.

× Because it designed with many of the flowers.

✓ Because it was designed with many flowers.

The bike receives the action of designing, so the passive voice is required. Use was designed, not designed. The phrase many flowers is also the natural form when speaking generally.

× Especially it's the color of the bikes was pink.

✓ Especially, the color of the bike was pink.

The answer refers to one bike, so bike should be singular. The original clause also has an unnecessary subject form, it's. The sentence should use the color of the bike as the subject.

× My dad and my mom when we.

✓ My dad and my mom selected it.

When we is an incomplete dependent clause, and it does not express a complete idea. A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb, so selected it completes the meaning.

× I think that bikes is really popular in my country.

✓ I think that bikes are really popular in my country.

Bikes is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb are, not the singular verb is.

× Many of my friends ride many kinds of bike.

✓ Many of my friends ride many kinds of bikes.

After many kinds of, use a plural countable noun because the sentence refers to different types of bikes.

× Their bikes is really amazing.

✓ Their bikes are really amazing.

Bikes is plural, so the verb must also be plural. Use are instead of is.

× Their bikes are really, really like the price is up so it's really.

✓ Their bikes are really amazing, and their prices are high.

The original sentence combines incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Use a complete clause with a suitable adjective, and connect the two complete ideas with and. Prices is plural, so it takes are.