Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner’s question instead of answering it, so it does not communicate whether you had a bike. Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or who gave it to you. Use a linking word like “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a small blue bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: Your response repeats the question and does not express an opinion about bikes in your country. Answer directly with “Yes, I think they are” or “No, I don’t think they are,” and support your view with specific reasons or examples. You could mention commuting, exercise, environmental concerns, traffic, or the availability of bike lanes.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. They are a convenient way to travel short distances, and many people use them to avoid traffic and get some exercise.