Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Use “had” instead of “have,” and add one specific supporting detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school. It was small and bright red, so I really liked it.

제안: Use the plural subject “bikes,” so say “they are popular.” Give a clear reason and finish your sentence instead of ending with “but.” You could mention environmental benefits, low cost, convenience, or popularity among young people.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many people use them to travel short distances, especially in crowded cities. They are also an environmentally friendly form of transportation.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of have because the situation occurred in the past.

× Yes, it's popular because it's a part of our country, but.

✓ Yes, they are popular because they are part of our country.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. The verb should also be are to agree with they.

× Yes, it's popular because it's a part of our country, but.

✓ Yes, it's popular because it's a part of our country.

But is a contrasting conjunction and normally needs to connect the sentence to another contrasting idea. Because the sentence does not provide a second idea, but should be removed. Avoid ending a complete answer with an unnecessary conjunction.