Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Correct “have” to “had,” “big” to “bike,” and include the article “a” and possessive “I.” You could add one specific detail, such as how often you used it or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Start with a clear opinion, such as “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.” Avoid unnecessary fillers and repetition, including “or so” and “etc.” Use correct grammar: “most people have their own bikes” and “use bikes for travelling.” Add a specific reason or example to make your answer more effective.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many people use them to travel short distances, especially to work or school, and they also help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a big when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Because the question asks about a past situation, have must change to the past-tense form had. Use the past tense when describing experiences from childhood. Also, big appears to be a spelling error for bike; this correction is necessary to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have a big when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. Say a child, not child. Use a before a singular countable noun when referring to one nonspecific person or thing.

× As I think bikes are most popular in my country because most of the people have its own bike here or so or most people use the bike for travelling etc.

✓ I think bikes are the most popular in my country because most people have their own bikes, and many people use bikes for travelling.

As I think is not the correct expression for introducing an opinion in this sentence. Use I think instead. The repeated expressions or so or make the sentence unclear. Use a suitable conjunction, such as and, to connect the reasons clearly.

× As I think bikes are most popular in my country because most of the people have its own bike here or so or most people use the bike for travelling etc.

✓ I think bikes are the most popular in my country because most people have their own bikes, and many people use bikes for travelling.

Most popular is a superlative form, so it normally needs the definite article the. Say the most popular when comparing bikes with all other forms of transport in the country.

× As I think bikes are most popular in my country because most of the people have its own bike here or so or most people use the bike for travelling etc.

✓ I think bikes are the most popular in my country because most people have their own bikes, and many people use bikes for travelling.

The pronoun its refers to a singular or nonhuman noun, but people is plural. Use their to refer to people. Also, own bikes agrees with the plural subject most people.

× As I think bikes are most popular in my country because most of the people have its own bike here or so or most people use the bike for travelling etc.

✓ I think bikes are the most popular in my country because most people have their own bikes, and many people use bikes for travelling.

The phrase most people refers to more than one person, so the noun should be plural: bikes. Use their own bikes rather than its own bike when referring to multiple people and multiple bicycles.