Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 質問は「子どもの頃、自転車を持っていましたか」と過去の経験を尋ねています。回答では、まず過去形の “No, I didn’t.” を使い、その後に理由や具体的な説明を1文加えましょう。“I haven’t a child” は意味が不自然で、質問への答えになっていません。

예시: No, I didn’t. I never had a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe. However, I often rode my friends’ bikes.

제안: 最初に “Yes, I do” と明確に答え、その後で自転車がどの程度普及しているか、誰が利用するか、理由などを説明しましょう。“some mouse people or rise” は意味が伝わりにくいため、“many people” や “most people” など、文脈に合う表現を使ってください。また、一般的な習慣には現在形の “ride” を使い、理由を “because” でつなぐと自然です。

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in cities. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips.

× No, I haven't a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about a past situation using 'Did you have...?', so the answer should also use the simple past tense: 'didn't have.' In addition, 'a child' does not answer the question about having a bike. Use 'a bike' or the pronoun 'one' to refer to the bike.

× Yes, I think some mouse people or rise ride a bike

✓ Yes, I think most people ride bikes.

'Mouse' is not the correct word here; the intended word is probably 'most.' Use 'most people' when referring to the majority of people. The phrase 'or rise' is unnecessary, and 'ride bikes' is the natural expression when speaking about bikes in general.