Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating “as a child.” Use “ride” for bicycles and tricycles, not “drive.” Also, “learned how to buy a bicycle” is unnatural in this context; say “learned how to ride a bicycle” or “got a bicycle.” Add one specific detail about when or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was very young, I rode a tricycle, and later I learned to ride a bicycle. I usually cycled around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: The answer is clear, but it is too brief and focuses only on young children. Use a more natural expression such as “children aged five or six,” and add a reason or example to develop your answer. A linking word such as “especially” or “for example” can make the response more coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. Many children start riding at around five or six years old because cycling is an enjoyable and affordable way to exercise. For example, it is common to see families riding bikes in parks at the weekend.

× As a child I used to drive or tricycle, but growing up I learned how to buy a bicycle too.

✓ As a child, I used to drive a tricycle, but growing up, I learned how to buy a bicycle too.

The singular countable noun tricycle requires the indefinite article a. The phrase drive or tricycle is therefore incorrect because it omits the article before tricycle. The corrected phrase is drive a tricycle.