Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容具体，有时间、颜色和活动细节，整体也能直接回答问题。但后半部分存在明显语法和搭配问题：应将“ride bike”改为“riding a bike”，“improve my physical abilities”可换成更自然的“improve my fitness”，而“keep my healthy”应改为“stay healthy”。此外，前面已经提到骑车去公园，后面可以用一个清晰的连接词简洁说明好处，避免句子过长。

예시: Definitely. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride it to the park with my classmates every weekend. It was great exercise and helped me stay healthy.

제안: 回答有明确观点，也提供了价格、便利性和童年经历等具体理由。不过，问题询问的是现在的普及程度，而答案主要使用过去时并集中描述童年，因此应先直接说明目前的情况，再进行补充。连接词“And”不够自然，可以改为“Moreover”或直接合并句子；“social together”搭配错误，应改为“socialize with friends”或“spend time with friends”。

예시: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in smaller cities. They are affordable and convenient, and they also help people stay fit. For example, many students ride bikes to school and use them to spend time with their friends.

× Definitely yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride the bicycle to the park with my classmates every weekend and I think ride bike is a good way to improve my physical abilities and keep my healthy

✓ Definitely yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride the bicycle to the park with my classmates every weekend and I think riding a bike is a good way to improve my physical abilities and keep me healthy.

在“I think”后面，如果主语是一个动作，应该使用动名词形式。这里“ride bike”表示“骑自行车这件事”，所以应改为“riding a bike”。同时，“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用冠词“a”。

× Definitely yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride the bicycle to the park with my classmates every weekend and I think ride bike is a good way to improve my physical abilities and keep my healthy

✓ Definitely yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride the bicycle to the park with my classmates every weekend and I think riding a bike is a good way to improve my physical abilities and keep me healthy.

“bike”是可数名词，表示泛指的一辆自行车时，单数名词前必须使用不定冠词“a”。因此应说“a bike”，不能说“ride bike”。

× Definitely yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride the bicycle to the park with my classmates every weekend and I think ride bike is a good way to improve my physical abilities and keep my healthy

✓ Definitely yes. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about nine, and I used to ride the bicycle to the park with my classmates every weekend and I think riding a bike is a good way to improve my physical abilities and keep me healthy.

“keep”后面需要使用宾格代词作宾语。“my”是物主限定词，后面通常需要接名词，例如“my health”；这里应使用宾格代词“me”，构成“keep me healthy”，意思是“让我保持健康”。

× It's a good way to social together.

✓ It's a good way to socialize together.

“social”是形容词，不能直接放在“to”后面作动词使用。这里需要使用动词“socialize”，表示“进行社交、与他人交往”。“to socialize”是不定式结构，符合“a good way to do something”的用法。