Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, but separate your ideas with linking words and correct the grammar. Use “learn to ride” rather than “learn ride,” and avoid a long run-on sentence by adding commas or full stops. You could also make the situation more natural by saying that your parents decided not to let you keep a bike or buy you one after seeing your difficulties.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I struggled to learn to ride it. I fell several times and even hurt myself, so my parents decided not to buy me one. As a result, I did not ride very often when I was young.

제안: This is a clear and well-developed answer with a direct opinion, a reason, and specific observations. To make it even more natural, replace “along the roadside” with “on the roads” or “along the streets,” since people usually ride on roads rather than beside them. You could also add a brief comparison or example, such as their popularity among students or commuters.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them around my neighbourhood and along the streets, especially in the morning. Many students and office workers use bikes for short trips because they are affordable, convenient, and better for the environment than cars.

× I did have a bike when I was a child I tried to learn ride several times but I kept falling and getting injured so my parents decided not to buy one for me

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child. I tried to learn how to ride it several times, but I kept falling and getting injured, so my parents decided not to buy one for me.

The original answer contains several independent clauses joined together without appropriate punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the main ideas with a full stop and use commas before coordinating conjunctions such as but and so. Also, learn should be followed by an infinitive phrase: learn how to ride or learn to ride. Adding it makes the verb structure complete and clear.