Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本回应了“没有”，但把 bike 说成了 bag，影响了内容准确性。语法上应使用 “I was” 而不是 “I were”，并且过去的家庭经济情况要用过去时：“my family didn’t have enough money”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体原因或例子，控制在2—3句话内。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family didn’t have enough money to buy one. Instead, I usually walked to school or played with my friends near my home.

제안: 回答中再次把 bike 误说成 bag，而且 “the character say go out of still” 表达不清，导致理由无法理解。建议使用清晰的结构：“Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular because…”，并提供具体原因，例如价格便宜、方便通勤或有助于环保。注意使用复数形式 “bikes” 和自然的搭配，如 “many people use bikes to commute”。

예시: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. Many people use them to commute to work or school, and cycling is also an environmentally friendly way to travel.

× No, I didn't have a bag when I were a child because my family don't have enough money to buy it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my family didn't have enough money to buy it.

谈论童年时期的情况，整句话应使用过去时。主语是“I”时，be动词的过去式应使用“was”，不能使用“were”。“don't have”是一般现在时，应改为过去时“didn't have”。

× No, I didn't have a bag when I were a child because my family don't have enough money to buy it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bag when I was a child because my family didn't have enough money to buy it.

“I”与be动词搭配时，过去时应使用“was”，而不是“were”。另外，“family”通常看作单数集体名词；如果表达现在情况，应说“my family doesn't have”。不过本句是在讲过去，所以使用“my family didn't have”更合适。

× Definitely I think the bag is popular in our country because many people like the character say go out of still.

✓ Definitely, I think the bag is popular in our country because many people like the character who says, “Go out of still.”

“the character”是第三人称单数，后面的动词应使用第三人称单数形式“says”，不能使用“say”。当“character”后面接一个描述其行为的从句时，可以使用“who says”连接，使句子结构更完整。

× Definitely I think the bag is popular in our country because many people like the character say go out of still.

✓ Definitely, I think the bag is popular in our country because many people like the character who says, “Go out of still.”

“the character say”直接放在“like”后面，句子结构不完整。这里需要用关系代词“who”引导定语从句，说明这个人物说了什么。另外，“Definitely”放在句首时通常后面加逗号。