Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, but correct the preposition in “bought it to me” to “bought it for me.” Also, “writing it” should be “riding it,” and “doing laps and the neighborhood” is unclear; say “riding around the neighborhood” or “doing laps around my neighborhood.” Add one specific detail about where or when you rode your bike to make the answer more natural and developed.

예시: Yes, I did. My dad bought it for me when I was about eight, and he taught me how to ride it. I really enjoyed riding around my neighborhood because it made me feel free, especially on sunny afternoons.

제안: Use a clear plural structure: “Bikes are popular because people of all ages use them.” Replace “aged people” with “older people” or “the elderly,” and avoid repeating “it” when referring to bikes. The final sentence, “And they do,” is incomplete and unnecessary. Give a specific reason, such as commuting, exercise, or avoiding traffic, and connect your ideas with a linking word such as “for example” or “also.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because people of all ages use them. For example, you can see children riding bikes for fun and older people using them for exercise. Many people also cycle to work because it is an affordable way to avoid traffic.

× Absolutely, My dad bought it to me when I was younger and he taught me how to ride it. I really enjoyed writing it because it made me feel free while doing laps and the neighborhood.

✓ Absolutely, my dad bought it for me when I was younger and he taught me how to ride it. I really enjoyed writing it because it made me feel free while doing laps in the neighborhood.

The preposition for is used after buy when indicating the person who receives something: bought it for me. The preposition in is needed before the area where the laps took place: in the neighborhood.

× I do think bikes are popular in my country because it's used by all the ages. Umm, you can see aged people riding it, even small children. And they do.

✓ I do think bikes are popular in my country because they are used by people of all ages. Umm, you can see older people riding them, even small children. And they do.

Bikes is plural, so it must be replaced with the plural pronoun they, and riding it must become riding them. Pronouns must agree with the nouns they refer to in number.

× I do think bikes are popular in my country because it's used by all the ages. Umm, you can see aged people riding it, even small children. And they do.

✓ I do think bikes are popular in my country because they are used by people of all ages. Umm, you can see older people riding them, even small children. And they do.

The subject bikes is plural, so it requires the plural verb are, not the singular form is. Always check that the subject and verb agree in number.

× I do think bikes are popular in my country because it's used by all the ages. Umm, you can see aged people riding it, even small children. And they do.

✓ I do think bikes are popular in my country because they are used by people of all ages. Umm, you can see older people riding them, even small children. And they do.

All the ages is not the natural quantifier phrase in this context. Use people of all ages to express that people of every age use bikes.

× I do think bikes are popular in my country because it's used by all the ages. Umm, you can see aged people riding it, even small children. And they do.

✓ I do think bikes are popular in my country because they are used by people of all ages. Umm, you can see older people riding them, even small children. And they do.

Aged people is grammatically possible but is not the natural expression for people who are advanced in age. Older people is the more appropriate adjective phrase in this context.