Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner's actual question directly. The response does not mention whether you had a bike, so it is irrelevant and grammatically inaccurate. Begin with a clear answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn't,” and then add one or two specific details about the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it. Keep the answer to two or three natural sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a clear and accurate explanation of why bikes are popular in Myanmar. Although you state your opinion, several phrases are unclear or incorrectly used, such as “we do have a lot of pressure,” “do mod,” and “use our advice to the availability.” Avoid fillers and repetition, and use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “as a result.” Include specific reasons, such as affordability, convenience, or traffic conditions.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Myanmar, especially among students and people living in smaller towns. They are affordable and convenient, and they help people avoid heavy traffic. For example, many young people ride bicycles to school or to nearby shops.

× OK, so do you have bath when you were a child?

✓ OK, so did you have a bath when you were a child?

The question refers to a past time, when you were a child, so the past-tense auxiliary did is required instead of do. After did, use the base form have.

× OK, so do you have bath when you were a child?

✓ OK, so did you have a bath when you were a child?

The singular countable noun bath needs the indefinite article a. We say have a bath, not have bath.

× I think that's very popular in my country.

✓ I think they are very popular in my country.

The question refers to bikes, which is plural. Therefore, use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are instead of the singular form that is.

× We always do mod, for example, participate.

✓ For example, we always participate.

The phrase do mod is not a clear or grammatically complete verb phrase in this sentence. Use the complete verb participate to express the activity clearly. Also, placing For example at the beginning creates a clearer sentence structure.