Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: This is a clear, natural answer with a direct response and specific supporting details, including the bike’s appearance and how you used it. To make it more accurate, add the articles “a” before “small basket” and “little seat,” and avoid beginning the final sentence with “And.” You could also use a slightly more natural phrase such as “a seat at the back.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for my fifth birthday, and it was pink and blue, with a small basket on the front and a little seat at the back. I was thrilled because I could ride it to the nearest park with my friends.

제안: The answer gives a relevant reason, but the second part contains several grammar and word-choice problems. Replace “Are people of all age” with “People of all ages,” “elder elderly” with “older people,” and “leisure rights” with “leisure rides.” Also, connect the ideas into complete sentences and use a clear linking word such as “In addition.”

예시: Yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and daily commutes. People of all ages, from children to older adults, use them for leisure rides or to avoid heavy traffic in the city. In addition, cycling is becoming more popular because it is an affordable and environmentally friendly form of transport.

× It was pink and blue with small basket on the front and little seat at the back.

✓ It was pink and blue with a small basket at the front and a little seat at the back.

Singular countable nouns such as basket and seat need the indefinite article a when they are mentioned for the first time. The preposition at is more natural than on when describing the position at the front or back of a bicycle.

× It was pink and blue with small basket on the front and little seat at the back.

✓ It was pink and blue with a small basket at the front and a little seat at the back.

Use at the front and at the back to describe locations or positions on a bicycle. On the front is not the natural prepositional expression in this context.

× Are people of all age, from children to elder elderly.

✓ People of all ages, from children to elderly people, use them for leisure rides or to avoid the hassle of city traffic.

Age should be plural because the sentence refers to people in different age groups. The natural expression is people of all ages.

× Are people of all age, from children to elder elderly.

✓ People of all ages, from children to elderly people, use them for leisure rides or to avoid the hassle of city traffic.

Elder elderly is incorrect because it repeats two related adjectives. Use elderly people to describe older people. Also, leisure rides is the correct expression for rides taken for enjoyment.

× Are people of all age, from children to elder elderly. Use them for leisure rights or to avoid the hassle of city traffic.

✓ People of all ages, from children to elderly people, use them for leisure rides or to avoid the hassle of city traffic.

The original wording contains an incomplete and incorrectly structured sentence. Because the intended meaning is a statement about people using bikes, begin with the subject People and use the main verb use. Do not use Are unless you are forming a complete question.