Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有回应考官关于“小时候是否有自行车”的问题，而且把 bike 误听或误说成了 bag。首先要直接回答 Yes 或 No，然后补充一到两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或父母为什么买给你。注意过去时态：用 did/had，而不是 do/have。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: 你基本回答了问题，也提供了过去和现在的对比，但有一些明显的语法、词汇和表达问题。应将单数 bike 改为复数 bikes，使用“the economy was not very strong”而不是“our country economic is not very good”，并把“share bags”改为“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。此外，最后一句不完整且重复，应该使用 because、also 或 for example 等连接词，把扫码使用共享单车的过程清楚表达出来。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They were even more common about ten years ago, when the economy was not as strong and they were an affordable way to travel. Nowadays, many people use shared bikes because they are convenient and can be unlocked by scanning a QR code.

× Do you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bag when you were a child?

“when you were a child”表示过去时间，因此主句也要使用一般过去时。一般过去时疑问句要用“Did + 主语 + 动词原形”，所以“Do you have”应改为“Did you have”。对应问题类型ID：5。

× Yeah, I think it is very popular in our country, especially about 10 years ago when our country economic is not very good.

✓ Yeah, I think they are very popular in our country, especially about 10 years ago when our country's economy was not very good.

“bikes”是复数名词，所以代词应使用复数“they”，相应的系动词也应使用“are”。“it is”应改为“they are”。对应问题类型ID：12。

× Yeah, I think it is very popular in our country, especially about 10 years ago when our country economic is not very good.

✓ Yeah, I think it is very popular in our country, especially about 10 years ago when our country's economy was not very good.

“about 10 years ago”表示过去的时间，因此从句中的“is”要改为一般过去时“was”。另外，“our country economic”应改为“our country's economy”，因为这里需要名词“economy”表示“经济状况”。对应问题类型ID：5。

× when our country economic is not very good

✓ when our country's economy was not very good

“economic”是形容词，不能直接作“国家经济”的中心名词。这里应使用名词“economy”，并用所有格“our country's”表示“我们国家的经济”。对应问题类型ID：13。

× And many people have these bikes even right now we have the share bags it can put on different cities, in every city and we can scan the.

✓ And many people have these bikes. Even right now, we have shared bikes in different cities, in every city, and we can scan them.

“shared bikes”是复数名词，因此后面不能用单数代词“it”，应使用复数代词“them”。“scan them”表示“扫描这些共享单车”。对应问题类型ID：12。

× And many people have these bikes even right now we have the share bags it can put on different cities, in every city and we can scan the.

✓ And many people have these bikes. Even right now, we have shared bikes in different cities, in every city, and we can scan them.

表示单车分布或出现的地点时，应使用介词“in”，所以应说“in different cities”，而不是“on different cities”。对应问题类型ID：11。

× And many people have these bikes even right now we have the share bags it can put on different cities, in every city and we can scan the.

✓ And many people have these bikes. Even right now, we have shared bikes in different cities, in every city, and we can scan them.

原句把多个完整句子直接连接在一起，缺少适当的句号、逗号和连接结构，导致句子过长且难以理解。应将其分成两个句子，并使用“and”连接并列成分。对应问题类型ID：26。