Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly at the beginning and correct the grammar: use “I’ve never ridden,” not “I’ve never rode,” and say “since I was a kid” or “when I was a child.” Avoid the unclear phrase “a single pair of a wheel”; a bicycle has two wheels, so explain your concern more naturally, such as being worried about losing your balance or exceeding the bike’s weight limit. You could also reduce hesitation and keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, and I’ve never learned how to ride one. I’ve always been a little afraid of losing my balance, although I might try it someday with proper guidance.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and use more accurate vocabulary: distinguish between bicycles and scooters or motorbikes if that is what you mean. Correct “every household have a certain bikes” to “many households have a bike” or “most households own a motorbike.” Replace the awkward phrase “wherever you go around” with “wherever you go” and add a specific reason, such as convenience, affordability, or heavy traffic. Avoid making an absolute claim unless it is accurate.

예시: Yes, motorbikes and scooters are extremely popular in Nepal, especially in Kathmandu. Many households own one because they are convenient and relatively affordable, and they make it easier to travel through the city’s heavy traffic.

× I've never rode a bike since I was kid till now.

✓ I've never ridden a bike since I was a kid until now.

After have or has, the past participle form of the verb is required. The past participle of ride is ridden, not rode. Rode is the simple past form.

× I've never rode a bike since I was kid till now.

✓ I've never ridden a bike since I was a kid until now.

The singular countable noun kid needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one nonspecific child. Say a kid, not kid.

× A single pair of, uh, a wheel can manage my weight.

✓ A single pair of wheels can manage my weight.

The noun after pair of must be plural because a pair consists of two items. Therefore, use wheels rather than a wheel. Also, a cannot be used inside the phrase pair of wheels.

× Yeah, bikes are popular in my country, especially, uh, the scooter.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in my country, especially scooters.

When speaking about scooters as a general category, use the plural form scooters. The plural form matches the general meaning of bikes and avoids referring to one specific scooter.

× Every household have a certain bikes with them.

✓ Every household has certain bikes with them.

Every household is a singular subject, so it must take the singular verb has, not have. The phrase certain bikes is also grammatically compatible with the plural noun bikes.

× Every household have a certain bikes with them.

✓ Every household has certain bikes with them.

Bikes is plural, so it cannot be used with the singular article a. Use certain bikes or some bikes. If you mean one bike, say a certain bike.

× Every household have a certain bikes with them.

✓ Every household has certain bikes with them.

The indefinite article a can only be used before a singular countable noun. Because bikes is plural, remove a and say certain bikes or some bikes.