Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本直接，也提供了具体细节（年龄、买车的人和颜色），但句子连接不够自然，出现了两次明显的停顿词“uh”，并且“when I was 6”与“when I was 16”的信息衔接略显突兀。“they bought me another one”中的“they”指代不清，建议改为“my parents bought me another one”。可以使用“When I was six”和“By the time I was sixteen”等连接方式，使时间顺序更清晰。

예시: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a blue bike when I was six, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school. By the time I was sixteen, my parents bought me a larger one because I had outgrown my first bike.

제안: 回答立场明确，原因也与问题相关，整体逻辑清楚。不过，“a safe place, a safe road”存在重复；“the roads and the streets”也可以简化为“the roads”；“are not equipped well”不够自然，建议改为“are not well equipped with bike lanes”。最后一句“the right space to ride their bike”可改为“enough space to cycle safely”。可以加入一个具体结果，例如人们担心交通事故，因此更倾向于开车或乘坐公共交通。

예시: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country. The main reason is that many roads are not well equipped with bike lanes, so cycling can be quite dangerous. As a result, most people prefer to drive or use public transportation instead of riding a bike.

× I did have a bike when I was 6, my dad bought me a blue bike and it was the first bike that I had uh, when I was uh, 16, they bought me another one.

✓ I did have a bike when I was 6. My dad bought me a blue bike, and it was the first bike that I had. When I was 16, they bought me another one.

原句把多个完整句子用逗号直接连接，形成逗号拼接错误，句子结构不清晰。应使用句号将完整句子分开，并在连接两个独立分句时使用逗号加连词。这里的过去时使用正确，因此不需要改变时态。

× And you know the roads and the streets in my country are not equipped well for bike riders.

✓ And you know, the roads and the streets in my country are not well equipped for bike riders.

副词 well 修饰过去分词 equipped 时，通常放在过去分词之前，构成 well equipped，而不是 equipped well。因此应改为 are not well equipped。