Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: الإجابة لا تجيب عن سؤال الممتحن، بل تكرر السؤال تقريبًا. يجب أن تبدأ بإجابة مباشرة مثل “Yes, I did” أو “No, I didn’t”، مع استخدام الزمن الماضي الصحيح: “when you were a child” أو “when I was a child”. أضف تفصيلًا قصيرًا، مثل نوع الدراجة أو مكان استخدامها، للحفاظ على إجابة طبيعية من جملتين أو ثلاث.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: الإجابة تبدأ برأي مناسب، لكنها غير مكتملة نحويًا؛ بعد “I think” يجب أن تأتي جملة كاملة، مثل “I think they are popular because…”. كلمة “conjunction” غير صحيحة في هذا السياق، والأفضل استخدام “heavy traffic” أو “traffic congestion”. أضف نتيجة أو مثالًا محددًا لتوضيح سبب شعبية الدراجات، واستخدم رابطًا مثل “because” أو “especially”.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have heavy traffic. They are especially common among students and people who want to save money on transportation.

× Did you have a bike when you are child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past form were, not the present form are. Use were with you.

× Did you have a bike when you are child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. Say a child, not child alone.