Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi vì em nói “a pink bag” thay vì “a bike”, đồng thời phần mở đầu “He asked” không cần thiết. Em nên bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời rõ ràng như “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Sau đó, hãy thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về màu sắc, người tặng, mục đích sử dụng hoặc cảm xúc của em. Cần sửa lỗi lặp “to to”, dùng từ phù hợp như “ride around my neighborhood” thay vì “go around the new neighbors”, và tránh phần diễn đạt khó hiểu “remember following ones but getting up and riding again”.

예시: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, and I used it to practise riding around my neighborhood. I fell off a few times at first, but I gradually became more confident.

제안: Em đã trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể, nên cấu trúc câu trả lời khá tốt. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa “Bags” thành “Bikes”, “use bike” thành “use bikes” hoặc “use a bike”, và dùng “for their daily transportation” tự nhiên hơn “for daily life”. Em có thể mở rộng thêm một lý do hoặc kết quả, chẳng hạn xe đạp tiết kiệm chi phí và thân thiện với môi trường. Từ “urban areas” phù hợp, nhưng nên tránh lặp ý giữa “many people” và “students”.

예시: Absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for daily transportation. For example, many secondary-school students ride bicycles to school every day. Cycling is especially common in urban areas, where it is also a practical way to avoid traffic jams.

× For example, students in high school or secondary school often ride bicycles every day, so cycling remains very common in urban areas.

✓ For example, students in high school or secondary school often ride bicycles every day, so cycling remains very common in urban areas.

No singular/plural error appears in this sentence. The plural noun bicycles correctly refers to bicycles in general.

× Absolutely. Bags are very popular in my country because many people use bike for daily life.

✓ Absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country because many people use bikes in their daily lives.

The noun bike should be plural because it refers to bicycles in general, not one specific bicycle. The phrase their daily lives is also more grammatically natural because the plural subject many people requires the plural possessive their and the plural noun lives. The word Bags has been changed to Bikes because the question is about bikes; this is a vocabulary correction rather than a grammar correction.

× My parents gave it to me for my birthday and I used it to to practice and go around the new neighbors and remember following ones but getting up and riding again.

✓ My parents gave it to me for my birthday, and I used it to practice riding, go around the neighborhood, remember the routes, and get up and ride again after falling.

The original sentence has an unnecessary repeated to and an unclear sequence of coordinated actions. The phrase go around the new neighbors is also not a natural sentence structure; go around the neighborhood expresses the intended meaning more clearly. Use parallel verb forms after used it to: practice, go, remember, and get.