Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有直接回答考官关于“童年是否有自行车”的问题，而且把回答说成了另一个疑问句。“when you were traded”表达不自然，可能是误听或误说。应先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，然后补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或学习骑车的经历。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 你的回答没有回应“自行车在你的国家是否受欢迎”，而是重复了一个关于包的问题，因此内容相关性和交流效果都很弱。应先直接表达观点，例如“Yes, I think bikes are quite popular”，然后用连接词补充原因和具体例子，比如自行车环保、方便，或在学生和通勤者中很常见。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are especially common among students and people who commute short distances because they are convenient and environmentally friendly.