Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear response such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or who gave it to you. A response of two or three connected sentences would be more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around our neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid unclear phrases such as “the Philippines is happy most for bike” and repeated words such as “some.” Use accurate expressions like “bikes are quite popular in the Philippines” and linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “also.” You could mention commuting, exercise, traffic, or environmental benefits.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines, especially for exercise and short trips. For example, I often see people riding bicycles in parks and residential areas at weekends. They are also useful because they help people avoid traffic and save money on transportation.

× I yes, I think Philippines is happy most for bike.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are the most popular in the Philippines.

The plural noun bicycles is appropriate because the speaker is discussing bikes in general. The country name also requires the definite article: the Philippines.

× I yes, I think Philippines is happy most for bike.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are the most popular in the Philippines.

Happy does not describe how commonly bikes are used. Popular is the appropriate adjective, and the superlative form most popular expresses that bikes are especially common.

× I yes, I think Philippines is happy most for bike.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are the most popular in the Philippines.

The country is called the Philippines, so the definite article the is required before Philippines.

× I yes, I think Philippines is happy most for bike.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are the most popular in the Philippines.

The original phrase bike uses a singular countable noun without an article. Using the plural noun bicycles avoids this problem because the statement refers to bikes generally.

× I yes, I think Philippines is happy most for bike.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are the most popular in the Philippines.

The phrase I yes is not a complete or natural sentence opening, and the words happy most for bike are incorrectly organized. Begin with Yes, I think and then use a complete subject–verb structure.

× When we are traveling outside in my home, I encounter some of my some people who use bikes.

✓ When I travel outside my home, I encounter some people who use bikes.

Outside my home is the correct prepositional phrase. The preposition in is not appropriate in this context because the speaker means leaving or going beyond the home.

× When we are traveling outside in my home, I encounter some of my some people who use bikes.

✓ When I travel outside my home, I encounter some people who use bikes.

Some of my some people incorrectly repeats the quantifier some and uses my unnecessarily. Use some people to refer to an unspecified number of people.

× When we are traveling outside in my home, I encounter some of my some people who use bikes.

✓ When I travel outside my home, I encounter some people who use bikes.

The original sentence contains an awkward combination of traveling outside in my home and repeated words. The corrected version has a clear introductory time clause followed by a complete main clause.

× So for me I.

✓ So, for me, bikes are popular.

The original phrase is incomplete because it does not contain a complete verb phrase or a clear predicate. Adding bikes are popular creates a complete sentence and directly answers the question.

× So for me I.

✓ So, for me, bikes are popular.

The words So for me I do not form a complete or meaningful sentence. Use the structure for me, bikes are popular to clearly express the speaker's opinion.