Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense and avoid repeating the same idea. Use “I had a bike” rather than “I have one bike,” and say “when I was a child” instead of “when I would were a child.” Add one specific detail, such as how often you rode it or what you used it for. Link the detail naturally with “and” or “because.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I usually rode it to school. I enjoyed cycling because it was convenient and gave me some exercise.

제안: Give a clear present-day opinion first, because the question asks about current popularity. Avoid the unclear phrase “Barbara modern bikes” and explain the comparison accurately: bicycles may be popular for exercise or leisure, while motorbikes are more common for transportation. Use correct tense and linking words such as “however” and “although,” and include a specific reason or example.

예시: Yes, bicycles are still fairly popular in my country, especially among children and people who exercise. However, motorbikes are more common for daily transportation because they are faster and more practical in busy cities. Many adults use them to commute to work.

× I have one bike when I would were a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past tense had instead of have. Use was after I to form the past-tense clause I was a child.

× I have one bike when I would were a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Would must be followed by the base form of a verb, but would were is not grammatically correct. In this sentence, would is unnecessary; use was to describe a past state.

× I usually ride to school.

✓ I usually rode to school.

The student is describing a regular activity during childhood, so the past tense rode is required instead of the present-tense form ride.

× In my opinion, when I was a child, it's very popular in my country, but right now it uh. The motorbike is, uh, Barbara modern bikes.

✓ In my opinion, bikes were very popular in my country when I was a child, but right now, motorbikes are more popular than bikes.

The general topic is bikes, so use the plural noun bikes. Because the subject motorbikes is plural, use are rather than is.

× In my opinion, when I was a child, it's very popular in my country, but right now it uh. The motorbike is, uh, Barbara modern bikes.

✓ In my opinion, bikes were very popular in my country when I was a child, but right now, motorbikes are more popular than bikes.

The phrase when I was a child refers to the past, so use were instead of the present-tense form are in the clause bikes were very popular.

× The motorbike is, uh, Barbara modern bikes.

✓ Motorbikes are more popular than bikes.

When comparing the popularity of two kinds of vehicles, use the comparative structure more popular than. The phrase Barbara modern bikes does not form a grammatical comparison.

× In my opinion, when I was a child, it's very popular in my country, but right now it uh. The motorbike is, uh, Barbara modern bikes.

✓ In my opinion, bikes were very popular in my country when I was a child, but right now, motorbikes are more popular than bikes.

The original response contains an incomplete and unclear clause after right now and does not connect the comparison correctly. Use one complete sentence with a clear subject, verb, and comparison.