Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ грамматически правильный и напрямую отвечает на вопрос, но он слишком короткий и повторяет формулировку вопроса. Добавьте одну конкретную деталь — например, как часто вы катались, где именно или для чего использовали велосипед. Это сделает ответ более естественным и содержательным.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends. It was a simple bike, but I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

제안: Основная идея понятна, но есть грамматические ошибки и повторы. Используйте неисчисляемое обобщение “bikes” без артикля и правильную форму: “bikes are”, а не “the bikes is”. Вместо “so much people” скажите “many people”, а вместо повторяющегося “where you can” — “that allow people to rent bikes”. Начните с чёткого тезиса, затем добавьте причину и конкретное наблюдение; избегайте разговорного “like” и повторов.

예시: I don’t think bikes are particularly popular in my country. Although there are apps that allow people to rent bicycles, relatively few people use them. In my experience, most people prefer to drive or take public transport, even at weekends.

× I don't think that the bikes is really popular in my country because I haven't seen so much people who are usually riding on the weekends.

✓ I don't think that bikes are really popular in my country because I haven't seen many people who usually ride them on weekends.

The plural subject bikes must be followed by the plural verb are, not is. Also, the phrase who usually ride is more natural for a habitual action than who are usually riding.

× I don't think that the bikes is really popular in my country because I haven't seen so much people who are usually riding on the weekends.

✓ I don't think that bikes are really popular in my country because I haven't seen many people who usually ride them on weekends.

People is a countable plural noun, so it must be modified by many, not much. Use much with uncountable nouns, such as much traffic or much time.

× I don't think that the bikes is really popular in my country because I haven't seen so much people who are usually riding on the weekends.

✓ I don't think that bikes are really popular in my country because I haven't seen many people who usually ride them on weekends.

When talking about bikes in general, the definite article the is unnecessary. Use bikes to refer to bikes as a general category.

× We have like apps where you can where you can rent a bike, but to be honest, not so much people use it.

✓ We have apps where you can rent a bike, but to be honest, not many people use them.

People is a countable plural noun, so many is required instead of much. The plural pronoun them is also appropriate because it refers to apps.

× We have like apps where you can where you can rent a bike, but to be honest, not so much people use it.

✓ We have apps where you can rent a bike, but to be honest, not many people use them.

The words where you can are repeated, which makes the sentence structurally incorrect. Remove the repetition. The word like is also unnecessary in this sentence.