Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答抓住了“12岁买自行车”和“骑车上学”这两个关键信息，但语法和表达不够自然。应直接使用过去时回答，例如“​​Yes, I did”和“I bought one when I was 12.” 注意主谓一致： “the neighboring children also had to buy one”；注意固定搭配：用“ride my bike to school”，不要说“bike to go to school”。最后一句“so we should have a bike”逻辑不自然，可以改为“so we all needed bikes”。建议使用“because”连接原因，并控制在2—3个清晰句子内。

예시: Yes, I did. I bought a bike when I was 12 because most of my classmates had one too. We used to ride our bikes to middle school every morning.

제안: 回答的主要问题是“现在自行车是否流行”，但开头应使用现在时“Yes, I do”，而不是过去时“Yes, I did”。“the bikes are popular”应改为“bikes are popular”；“12 years children”应改为“12- to 14-year-old children”；“every children”应改为“every child”或“all the students”。不要重复“bike, go to school”，直接说“ride bikes to school”。句末“walk off the”意思不完整，应删除。建议明确限定范围，例如说明自行车在中学生中很流行，并用“especially”补充具体信息。

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among 12- to 14-year-old students. Many of them ride their bikes to middle school because it is convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes it is, I had to buy when I was 12 years old.

✓ Yes, I did. I had to buy one when I was 12 years old.

问题发生在过去，所以回答应使用过去时“Yes, I did”，而不是“Yes, it is”。另外，buy后面需要宾语，因此要说“buy one”，表示“买一辆自行车”。

× There's neighbors children also has to buy each one.

✓ There were also neighboring children who had to buy one each.

这里描述的是过去的情况，所以there be结构应使用“There were”，而不是“There’s”。“one each”表示“每人一辆”，比“each one”更自然。

× There's neighbors children also has to buy each one.

✓ There were also neighboring children who had to buy one each.

“children”是复数，不能搭配单数动词“has”。同时，因为事情发生在过去，应使用“had”。

× When were we school?

✓ When we were in middle school,

表示“在学校/上学时”通常使用介词“in”，所以应说“when we were in middle school”。原句缺少介词“in”，并且语序也不正确。

× In the middle school we used to bike to go to school every morning so we should have a bike.

✓ In middle school, we used to bike to school every morning, so we had to have a bike.

“should have”通常表示建议或应该做某事，不适合表达过去的必要性。这里想表达“因此我们必须有一辆自行车”，应使用“had to have”。

× Yes, I did. I think the bikes are popular in my country,

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country,

问题使用的是现在时“Do you think...?”，所以回答应使用“Yes, I do”，而不是过去时“Yes, I did”。这里泛指自行车时通常不需要使用定冠词“the”。

× For the 12 years children or the 14 years children,

✓ For 12-year-old or 14-year-old children,

年龄作前置定语时，要使用“数字-year-old”的形式，其中“year”必须是单数，并且整个短语用连字符连接。不能说“12 years children”。

× Because in the middle school every children used to bike,

✓ Because in middle school, every child used to bike,

“every”后面必须接单数可数名词，因此应说“every child”，不能说“every children”。“children”是复数形式。

× Every children used to bike, go to school and, uh, walk off the.

✓ Every child used to bike to school or walk there.

原句中的“walk off the”结构不完整，“the”后面缺少名词，因此句子没有完整的语法结构。可以改为“walk there”，表示“走到那里”，并使用“or”连接两种不同的出行方式。