Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Avoid repeating the same idea and correct the grammar: use “my family was poor,” “we didn’t have enough money,” and “I didn’t have a bike.” Add one specific detail about how you travelled or how you felt about not owning a bike.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family was quite poor and we couldn’t afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school or used public transportation. I sometimes felt envious of my friends who had bikes.

제안: Begin with a clear answer and use accurate vocabulary, such as “Bicycles are quite popular in Japan.” Correct “one of the popular vehicles is bicycle” to “bicycles are a popular form of transportation,” and replace “lighter bike” and “go to drink,” which are unclear in this context. Support your answer with specific uses, such as commuting, cycling for exercise, or riding to nearby shops.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Japan, especially in cities. Many people ride them to train stations, supermarkets, or nearby workplaces because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. Others use bicycles for exercise or leisure at the weekend.

× Actually I don't have a bike because my family were poor family.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike because my family was poor.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have. The phrase my family was poor also expresses the family's past condition naturally.

× Actually I don't have a bike because my family were poor family.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike because my family was poor.

Family is a singular collective noun in this sentence, so it takes the singular verb was, not were. Also, poor is used as an adjective after was.

× So we don't we didn't have money so I didn't have a bike

✓ We didn't have money, so I didn't have a bike.

The response refers to the student's childhood, so don't have must be changed to didn't have. The repeated forms don't and didn't should not both be used.

× So we don't we didn't have money so I didn't have a bike

✓ We didn't have money, so I didn't have a bike.

The original sentence contains a repeated and incomplete verb sequence: don't we didn't. Remove the incorrect repetition and use a comma before so to connect the cause and result clearly.

× Yes in Japan one of the popular vehicles is bicycle.

✓ Yes, in Japan, one of the most popular vehicles is a bicycle.

When describing something as belonging to the top group, use the superlative form most popular after one of the. The phrase one of the popular vehicles does not clearly express this meaning.

× Yes in Japan one of the popular vehicles is bicycle.

✓ Yes, in Japan, one of the most popular vehicles is a bicycle.

A singular countable noun such as bicycle needs an article. Use a bicycle because the sentence refers to a bicycle as one example of a popular vehicle.

× People usually lighter bike and go to drink.

✓ People usually ride bikes and go out for a drink.

Lighter cannot function as the main verb here. Use the verb ride with bikes. The corrected sentence also uses two parallel verb phrases: ride bikes and go out.

× People usually lighter bike and go to drink.

✓ People usually ride bikes and go out for a drink.

The natural expression is go out for a drink, not go to drink, when talking about going somewhere to have a drink.