Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, but avoid repeating “when I was a child” and “bike.” The reason is relevant, although you could make it more natural by explaining whether you enjoyed cycling or how often you used the bike. Use a linking word such as “In fact” to introduce the specific memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school. In fact, I still remember falling off once, but fortunately I wasn’t seriously injured.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with a more specific explanation. Avoid repeating “Lagos City”; say “Lagos” instead, and use “many students use bikes” rather than “there are so many students that use bikes.” You could also mention affordability, traffic, or convenience to make the answer more developed and precise.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in Lagos. Many students use them to travel to school because they are affordable and convenient. They are also useful for avoiding the heavy traffic that is common in the city.