Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Back when I was a child, back when I was a child, yes, I did have a bike and I had convinced my dad and my mother to actually buy me one. And it was actually, umm, pink. And it had the character of uh, Turkish series called Chilekas, and it was very cute.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
I wouldn't really connect bikes according to countries because I don't think it's related, but in my country where I live, I used to live, I'm so sorry. I used to live in London and in London it's pretty common to actually cycle and they even have bikes on the roads for people to use. Of course they charge a specific amount, but yes, I would say it's very popular in London.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 72.0제안: Answer the question directly without repeating the opening phrase. Use a more natural expression such as “I persuaded my parents to buy me one” instead of “I had convinced my dad and my mother.” Also, say “It had a character from a Turkish TV series on it,” and connect your supporting details smoothly. Try to keep the answer concise while adding one specific reason why you liked the bike.
예시: Yes, I did. I persuaded my parents to buy me a pink bike when I was about seven. It had a cute character from a Turkish TV series on it, so I was really excited to ride it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 65.0제안: Give a clear answer about your country first, rather than questioning whether cycling is related to countries. Avoid unnecessary self-correction and repetition. Since the question asks about your country, refer to the country directly; if you want to discuss London, explain that it is an example of cycling being popular there. Use more natural vocabulary, such as “bike-sharing schemes” and “users are charged a small fee,” and include a reason for the popularity.
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities such as London. Many people cycle to work because it is cheap, convenient, and environmentally friendly. There are also bike-sharing schemes, where people can rent a bike for a small fee.
문법
× And it had the character of uh, Turkish series called Chilekas, and it was very cute.
✓ And it had a character from a Turkish series called Chilekas, and it was very cute.
The singular countable noun character needs the indefinite article a because it is being mentioned for the first time. Use a before a singular countable noun when referring to one non-specific item.
× And it had the character of uh, Turkish series called Chilekas, and it was very cute.
✓ And it had a character from a Turkish series called Chilekas, and it was very cute.
The preposition from is more appropriate than of because the character comes from or belongs to the series. Use from to show the source or origin of something.
× I wouldn't really connect bikes according to countries because I don't think it's related.
✓ I wouldn't really connect bikes with particular countries because I don't think they are related to any particular country.
The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. The correct pronoun is they. Plural nouns must be replaced by plural pronouns such as they, them, or their.
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