Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and then add one or two specific details. Correct the word order and verb tense: say “my father bought me a red one” and “I really liked it.” Avoid fillers such as “uh,” and use a more natural expression such as “my first attempt to ride it” instead of “my first attempt trying to use this bike.”

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my father bought me a red bike, and I really liked it. I still remember my first attempt to ride it because I found it difficult to balance, but I gradually became more confident.

제안: Give a clear answer and organize the supporting details with linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases: say “in cities such as São Paulo” rather than “cities like you, Claro,” “use bikes for many activities” rather than “use bikes to everything,” and “areas without good public transport” if that is your intended meaning. Include one specific reason why bicycles are popular.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities such as São Paulo. They are useful for commuting to work or school and for avoiding heavy traffic. In addition, they are an affordable and environmentally friendly form of transport, particularly in areas with limited public transportation.

× My father bought to me a red one.

✓ My father bought me a red one.

The verb buy does not require the preposition to before the recipient when the recipient comes directly after the verb. Use the pattern buy someone something: bought me a red one.

× My father bought me red one.

✓ My father bought me a red one.

A singular countable noun such as one needs an article. Use a because this is one unspecified red bike.

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

The speaker is describing a past experience from childhood, so the past-tense form liked is more consistent with the surrounding past-tense verbs was and bought.

× My first attempt trying to use this bike.

✓ My first attempt to use this bike.

After the noun attempt, use the infinitive with to when describing the purpose or action attempted: attempt to use. Do not use attempt trying in this structure.

× We can use bikes to everything.

✓ We can use bikes for everything.

Use the preposition for to express purpose or function. Bikes can be used for everything, not to everything.

× Go to supermarket, go to work, go to school.

✓ Go to the supermarket, go to work, and go to school.

Supermarket is a singular countable noun referring to a particular type of place, so it needs the definite article the. Work and school can be used without an article when referring to their general activities or purposes.