Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有直接回应考官关于“小时候是否有自行车”的问题，而是反问了一个关于书包的问题，因此内容不得分，也会影响连贯性。回答时应先明确表达“Yes”或“No”，然后补充具体细节，例如自行车的类型、使用场景或原因。建议控制在2—3句话，并使用“because”“for example”等连接词展开。

예시: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends. It was a great way to have fun and stay active.

제안: 你的回答没有回答考官关于自行车是否受欢迎的问题，而是改变了话题，谈到了书包。因此，回答缺少直接性和相关细节。你可以先表明自行车是否流行，再说明原因，例如环保、方便、价格低或适合短途出行，并用“because”“especially”等词连接观点。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are convenient and environmentally friendly, so many people use them for short journeys. In addition, cycling is becoming more popular as a form of exercise.