Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，原因也比较清楚，并使用了“because”和“so”连接信息。不过，“agree with buying”搭配不自然，应改为“agree to buy one”或“agree to let me have one”。另外，“go out by myself”可以具体说明骑车外出的情况，使答案更生动。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried about my safety and didn’t want me to ride around by myself. As a result, they never agreed to buy me one.

제안: 回答了问题并给出了原因，但存在明显的语法和表达问题。“share bike”应改为复数“shared bikes”或“bikes for sharing”；“in our in my country”是重复和自我纠正，应只保留“in my country”。建议补充共享单车受欢迎的具体原因，例如方便、便宜以及适合短途出行。

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes. They are convenient and inexpensive, so many people use them for short journeys or to get to the nearest subway station.

× No, I didn't have a bike because my parents didn't like me to go out by myself, so they didn't agree with buying a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents didn't like me to go out by myself, so they didn't agree to let me buy a bike.

“agree with”通常表示“同意某人的观点或看法”，这里想表达“同意让某人买自行车”，应使用“agree to let someone do something”。因此，“didn't agree with buying”应改为“didn't agree to let me buy”。

× Yes, because there are so many share bike in our in my country.

✓ Yes, because there are so many shared bikes in my country.

“so many”后面必须接可数名词复数，因此“bike”应改为“bikes”。另外，“shared bike”表示“共享单车”，其中“shared”是修饰“bike”的过去分词形式。

× Yes, because there are so many share bike in our in my country.

✓ Yes, because there are so many shared bikes in my country.

“our in my country”结构不完整且重复，句子中只能保留正确的地点表达“in my country”。在口语中如果出现自我修改，应在最终答案中删除错误或重复的部分，使句子结构完整、清晰。