Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition such as “when I was a child,” “this bike,” and “for me.” Use a clear structure: answer the question first, then explain why the bike was important and how you used it. Improve accuracy with phrases such as “one of my dream bikes,” “ride it to and from school,” and “an essential means of transportation.” Try to reduce fillers like “uh” and keep the response to three or four well-connected sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was one of my dream bikes, so I was extremely excited when I got it. I used to ride it to and from school every day, so it was an essential means of transportation for me.

제안: Give a complete and grammatical answer because the current response ends abruptly. State your opinion first, then provide two specific reasons, such as heavy traffic and the low cost of cycling. Correct errors including “bikes are,” “one of the most densely populated countries,” and “throughout the country.” Use linking words such as “mainly because” and “in addition,” and avoid fillers and vague phrases like “a bike made.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Bangladesh, mainly because many cities suffer from heavy traffic congestion. They are also an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, especially for students and workers. In addition, cycling can be faster than using a car during rush hour.

× it was one of my dream bike

✓ it was one of my dream bikes

After one of, the following noun must be plural because the expression refers to one item from a group of several items. Therefore, bike should be bikes.

× I was so excited for this bike

✓ I was so excited about this bike

When excited describes a person's enthusiasm about an existing object or situation, excited about is the appropriate prepositional phrase. Excited for is generally used when looking forward to something happening to someone.

× bike are really very popular in my country

✓ bikes are really very popular in my country

The general statement refers to bikes as a category, so the plural noun bikes is needed. The plural subject correctly takes the plural verb are.

× Bangladesh is one of the most largest population country

✓ Bangladesh is one of the most populous countries

Most largest is an incorrect double superlative. Use either largest or most populous. Here, most populous is the natural expression for describing a country with a large population.

× one of the most largest population country

✓ one of the most populous countries

After one of, the noun must be plural because the subject is one member of a group. Therefore, country must be changed to countries.

× population country

✓ populous countries

Population is a noun, but an adjective is needed to describe countries. The adjective populous means having a large population.

× on all over the country

✓ all over the country

All over already functions as a prepositional phrase meaning throughout an area, so the additional preposition on is unnecessary.

× and a bike made

✓ and bikes make traveling easier

The original phrase is incomplete and does not clearly express a complete idea. Because the question asks about bikes in general and uses the present tense, bikes make traveling easier provides a complete and grammatically appropriate clause.