Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 「Yes, I have.」は現在完了形のため、この過去の経験に関する質問には不自然です。「Yes, I did.」または「Yes, I had one.」を使いましょう。さらに、子どもの頃の自転車について具体的な情報を1つ加えると、より自然で効果的な回答になります。例えば、いつ乗っていたか、どこで乗っていたか、誰からもらったかなどを説明できます。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was about eight years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 「the right school」は文脈に合わず、おそらく「riding bikes」または「bikes」が適切です。また、「the people who ride the bike」は「people riding bikes」、「go stations」は「go to the station」と言います。最初に「Yes, they are popular in my country.」と直接答え、その後に「because」や「For example」を使って、通勤・通学で利用されていることを具体的に説明しましょう。文が長くなりすぎないよう、2～3文に分けると明確です。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. I often see people riding them to work or school in the morning. I sometimes ride my bike to the station because it is convenient and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about a past experience with “Did you have...?”, so the answer should use the simple past auxiliary “did,” not the present perfect auxiliary “have.”

× Yes, I think the right school is popular in my country because in the morning I always see the people who ride the bike and I also use the bike to go stations every morning.

✓ Yes, I think the right school is popular in my country because in the morning I always see people who ride bikes, and I also use a bike to go to stations every morning.

The verb “go” requires the preposition “to” before a destination, so “go stations” should be “go to stations.” “Ride bikes” and “use a bike” are more appropriate when speaking about bikes in general. Also, avoid repeating “the bike” unless you are referring to one specific bike.