Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use the past tense consistently because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid repeating the same idea; give a direct answer and add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity by using a complete sentence with a clear subject and verb. Replace “short rubbles” with “short distances” and explain specifically why people use bikes, such as for shopping, visiting neighbors, or avoiding traffic. Use linking words such as “for example” to connect your details.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient for short distances. For example, people often ride them to the market or to visit their neighbors, especially when they want to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have. I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the answer should use the past auxiliary did and the past-tense verb had. Use I did to answer a question beginning with Did you...? and use had for possession in the past.

× Bikes are popular in my country because they use this when short rubbles, biking going to market, going to neighbours.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because people use them for short trips, biking to the market, and visiting their neighbors.

The pronoun this incorrectly refers to plural bikes, so it should be them. However, people is a clearer subject because people use bikes, not bikes use themselves. The activities after for should also refer to the purpose of using bikes.

× Bikes are popular in my country because they use this when short rubbles, biking going to market, going to neighbours.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because people use them for short trips, biking to the market, and visiting their neighbors.

The original sentence contains incomplete and incorrectly connected phrases, such as short rubbles and biking going to market. Use a clear structure with a subject, a verb, and parallel activity phrases: for short trips, biking to the market, and visiting their neighbors.