Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本切题，并且提供了颜色、骑车地点和学习骑车的具体经历，内容比较丰富。不过，“over rode”应改为“rode”， “eat to go”应改为“used to go”， “shorts outing”应改为“short outings”。另外，第一句表达不够自然，建议说“that I used to ride with my grandparents”。可以使用“Also”或“Moreover”连接细节，并注意全篇控制在三到四句内。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had a beautiful red bike that I used to ride with my grandparents. We often went on short outings in the countryside, and I remember learning to ride without training wheels on a sunny afternoon.

제안: 回答的观点是清楚的，但答案在“very”处中断，导致原因没有表达完整，也明显影响流利度和内容完整性。“used to write”应改为“used to ride”，但如果描述现在的情况，更自然的是“prefer to take public transportation”。建议先直接回答，再说明原因，例如城市公共交通便利、道路拥堵或骑车距离较远。可以使用“because”连接原因，并补充一个具体对比或例子。

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to take public transportation, such as the subway or buses, because it is more convenient for travelling long distances. In large cities, cycling can also be unsafe because of heavy traffic.

× When I was a child I had a beautiful red bike that I over rode with my grandparents.

✓ When I was a child, I had a beautiful red bike that I rode with my grandparents.

“ride”的过去式是“rode”。“overrode”是“推翻、否决”的意思，不表示“骑”。另外，在时间状语从句“When I was a child”后加逗号，可以使句子结构更清晰。

× We used to eat to go on shorts outing in the countryside.

✓ We used to go on short outings in the countryside.

“used to”后面应接动词原形。这里“eat to go”的动词组合不正确，应该直接使用“go”。“short outings”表示“短途出游”，符合句意。

× We used to eat to go on shorts outing in the countryside.

✓ We used to go on short outings in the countryside.

“outing”是可数名词。这里表示经常进行短途出游，所以应使用复数“outings”。“shorts”通常表示短裤，不是“short”的复数形式。

× I don't think so I suppose that many people in our country used to write to take the public transportation like the subway and the bus instead of riding bikes.

✓ I don't think so. I suppose that many people in our country prefer to take public transportation, such as the subway and buses, instead of riding bikes.

“I don't think so”和“I suppose”是两个独立的句子，不能直接连接，需要加句号。“used to write to take”结构不正确；表达现在的普遍偏好时，可以使用“prefer to take”。“public transportation”表示泛指的公共交通，通常不加定冠词“the”。

× I don't think so I suppose that many people in our country used to write to take the public transportation like the subway and the bus instead of riding bikes.

✓ I don't think so. I suppose that many people in our country prefer to take public transportation, such as the subway and buses, instead of riding bikes.

“public transportation”是不可数名词，在这里表示泛指的公共交通，不需要使用定冠词“the”。应说“take public transportation”。

× Maybe because riding bikes is very

✓ Maybe it is because riding bikes is not very popular.

原句在“very”后没有完成表达，句子不完整。“very”通常需要修饰一个形容词或副词，因此补充“not very popular”后，句子结构和意思才完整。