Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有直接回答“小时候是否有自行车”，而且句子结构和词义都不准确。应使用一般过去时，例如“Did you have...?”可以回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，然后补充一个具体细节。注意“when I was a child”表示“当我小时候”，不要使用“when you will accord”这种不符合语境的表达。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点。应先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，再说明原因并提供具体例子。可以使用“because”“especially”等连接词，使答案更连贯；建议回答2至4句话，避免只重复题目。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in big cities. They are convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly, so many people use them for short trips.

× Do you have a bike when you will accord?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

题目使用一般过去时“Did you have”，询问的是童年时期的经历，因此回答也应使用一般过去时。这里应使用“had”和“was”，而不是现在时“Do you have”。“accord”不符合句意，且不属于合适的英语表达；应直接说明“when I was a child”（当我还是孩子时）。

× Do you have a bike when you will accord?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

“when”引导过去的时间状语从句时，应根据语境使用过去时，而不应使用“will”。“will accord”既不符合题目的过去时间，也不是表达该意思的自然搭配。回答过去经历时，应使用“I had ... when I was ...”。